Keeping Lance – Part Two 2 of Taking Lance, Candi Kay

Keeping LanceCR Rating: Hot Stuff!

Publisher: Self Published

Length:  32,120 Words

Reviewer: Jay

Tags: Bi Erotica But Really Homo Erotic, Younger Man-Older Man, Daddy Kink

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Official Blurb: 

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Rick Preston has been hooking up with his former stepson on and off for three years. Rick is almost forty-three and Lance has just turned twenty-one. It’s just sex, right? Wrong. Somewhere along the way real feelings become involved and Rick has to either decide to move forward with the much younger man or take a step back and allow Lance to be happy with someone his own age. Throw in Rick’s girlfriend, Lance’s former boyfriend, and a couple of others who try their damndest to keep the two men apart, and Lance and Rick must fight like hell to finally find their happily-ever-after.

MM, MF, MMF, Bi-Erotica, Older Man/Younger Man, Stepfather/Stepson

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The author provided me a copy in return for my opinion. Good or Bad.

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Review:

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I didn’t read part 1 of this series but I didn’t have to read the first book. It is recapped here enough for me to know what went down in book 1 – Rick was married to Lance’s bitch of a mother when Lance was 18. She wouldn’t accept her son’s gay. Rick has the hots for his stepson and the boy reciprocates those feelings. They start fucking and Rick and his wife divorce but the stepson and the step daddy keep it goin’ on. Lance’s mother is a closeted lesbian and the irony was that she was angry at her boy. So Lance and Rick decided to give her a big ole STFU – Finding out was my defining moment and I made use of it by coming out in a big way – by making sure my mother walked in while I was balls deep in the ass of her former husband. It was priceless.  Yessiree, I can only imagine how priceless.

In this book it is 3 years down the track and Lance is 21, Rick is 43, and Lance has been away at college with holidays spent at Rick’s. He is coming home to his stepdaddy’s for his birthday after a weird Christmas and tension between them. That’s the bones of the story. Of course they are getting it on soon enough.
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Our first kiss after so long is heated and angry. Our teeth are colliding with the movements of our mouths and tongues. Never breaking the kiss, Rick grabs my legs and lifts me up, my legs automatically wrapping tightly around his body.

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He presses a now lubed finger roughly in my asshole. When I feel the large finger inside my small hole, I lift my hips silently begging for more. He moves his finger in and out for a few seconds before introducing another alongside it, spreading them to stretch my opening.  

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With little in the way of prep, he lifts my legs and places them behind his back. He guides the head of his dick to my hole and pushes it all the way inside in one long thrust. I cry out in pain. Rick gives my tight hole a few minutes to adjust, gently putting his arms around me and pulling my body where it is flush with his. He leans down and licks the tears off my cheeks. The tears I didn’t realize were still falling. 

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The only sounds are those of our bodies slapping together, our heavy breathing and our moans. I reach between us and grab my dick and start stroking as Rick moves his cock in and out of my ass.

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But there’s some angst because Rick is now seeing a woman named Claire. Rick is also a bit uptight about the age difference between Lance and him. So they have time apart again. In that time there’s a threessome and more, with a gouger named Karen, her husband Aaron and a cute boy, Travis. Lance goes back to Marc, his ex, while Rick and Lance had been apart. But they do make their way back to the fucking and the older man-younger man love you know is there between these guys. Claire is despatched and the lovin’ is on.

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My Verdict:

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I’m giving a BIG shout out to Candi Kay for giving me a review copy. My first. It doesn’t matter if the writer gives me a book to read I’ll say how I feel about it. So how did I feel about it? I really got into it. I’m no expert but I’d say that Candi Kay has a future writing. This is erotic but it also has a good story with good editing (I know, that hoary old fucking chestnut of mine again) and I hope to read more of Ms Kay if they are gay or homoerotic-bi stories. If you care for the daddy-stepson kink, older-younger dude thing, which we do at CR, then this is good, especially if you want a bit of story to guide your hand, and there’s nothing wrong with that. They still fuck other people, there are menages, so it is erotica, but it’s a bit more romantic with a good plot. If you like the things I’ve written, and you don’t mind some pussy in your story, (there really isn’t much) this is good reading. Sexy storytime here my Cocky Peeps.  Hot Stuff!  

7 thoughts on “Keeping Lance – Part Two 2 of Taking Lance, Candi Kay

  1. Thanks for the copy and no problems for the review. The gifs make it easy. Keep writing the kinky stuff. It’s right at home here. 🙂

  2. I read this because of your review. You don’t get much quality bi/gay erotic fiction like this book. Thanks for the review Jay.
    Doug T

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